2007-09-21

Confession

I know this may seem sudden to you, but it's something I've been feeling for a long time. It's been hard to find the confidence to tell you this, because I'm not sure how you'll respond, but please consider what I have to say. When I first saw you at the dance last year, I felt something I'd never felt before. It was like a warm glow inside me. The way your eyes seem to light up when you smile, it's almost as if I'm watching an angel playing in the clouds. And no matter what your answer may be, I want you to hear me and know how I feel about you: I want to bang your ass.

I think I need a better transition from the clouds part into the next sentence. What do you think?

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